Thursday, October 1, 2015

MicroFiction Hemingway Style

1. Girl in wheelchair leaves Aldo dejected.
2. Three shots, a final gasp, silence.
3. Funeral: 'Till death do us part?
4.  Wanted a mother; got a babysitter. 
5. Anxiety ridden children run through halls.
6. "Parent Night" makes her tear up.

8 comments:

  1. Why do all of these stories have to make me think sadness. Trying to make it happy just makes it seem as though I'm trying too hard though.

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  2. Gosh Dorothy, just ripping my heart out like that.

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  3. haha, does two have to do with alcohol or gun shots ? kidding haha! but i can relate to the 5th one . its a pretty good statement

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  4. I liked the one about wanting a mother and getting a babysitter. Deep.

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  5. These all have really spooky children aspects to them. Are you preparing for Halloween?

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  6. The third one is so sad. It left me thinking about how the other partner would grieve.

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  7. The 4th and 6th one are sad but i could definitly envision the background behind these stories. Nice job on the iceberg theiry

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